Glossary
Subject Line – The text displayed in the recipient’s inbox that determines whether they open the email.
Open Rate – The percentage of email recipients who open a given email.
Click-Through Rate (CTR) – The percentage of recipients who clicked on one or more links in the email.
FOMO (Fear of Missing Out) – A psychological trigger used in marketing to encourage quick action.
Segmentation – Dividing an email list into smaller groups based on demographics, behavior, or other data.
Personalization Token – A piece of code in email platforms used to insert personalized information like the subscriber’s name.
A/B Testing – Comparing two versions of an email to see which performs better based on metrics like open rate or CTR.
Table of contents
How to Craft Email Subject Lines That Actually Get Clicked

The ROI Power of a Great Subject Line
Email marketing can produce a return on investment of $42 for every $1 spent. But that potential depends heavily on a single factor: whether people open your emails. A compelling subject line is the entry point. It determines if your audience engages or ignores you. Let’s explore how to write subject lines that drive results.
Key Elements of High-Performing Subject Lines
1. Timeliness & Urgency
People respond to immediacy. Urgent subject lines create a sense of limited opportunity, compelling recipients to act fast.
Examples:
- “Only 24 Hours Left: Save Big”
- “Flash Sale Ends at Midnight”
- “New Arrivals Just Dropped”
2. Personalization
Generic messages don’t perform. Using names, behavior, and interests makes your subject lines feel tailored.
Examples:
- “[First Name], You Left Something Behind”
- “Found Something Perfect for Your Style”
- “Still Thinking About That Cart?”
Stat: Personalized subject lines can boost open rates by up to 26%.
3. Make an Offer
Lead with value. Your audience needs a reason to open your email. Offers, discounts, and incentives grab attention.
Examples:
- “Free Shipping on Orders Over $50”
- “Buy One, Get One Free Today Only”
- “VIPs Save 20% This Weekend”
4. Spark Curiosity
Teasing content without giving it away builds intrigue. Use mystery to make recipients want to learn more.
Examples:
- “This One Product Changed Everything”
- “The Secret Is Finally Out”
- “What’s Inside Might Surprise You”
Practical Subject Line Writing Tips
1. Keep It Concise
Stay under 60 characters or go over 70. Subject lines in the 60–70 character “dead zone” tend to perform poorly.
Best practice: Mobile users typically see only the first 35–50 characters.
2. Be Straightforward
Avoid overly clever phrasing. The clearer your message, the better.
Examples:
- “50% Off Ends Tonight”
- “New Collection Just Landed”
3. Create Exclusivity
Make your audience feel special. Use phrases that imply insider status or early access.
Examples:
- “Early Access for Subscribers Only”
- “You’re on the List—Sneak Peek Inside”
4. Avoid ALL CAPS and Over-Punctuation
These can trigger spam filters or look unprofessional.
Do: “Final Hours: 25% Off”
Don’t: “HURRY!!! ACT NOW!!!”
5. Use Humor Thoughtfully
Humor builds connection but must match your brand voice.
Examples:
- “Oops, We Did It Again”
- “No Tricks. Just 20% Off.”
6. Ask a Question
Questions spark engagement. Make sure your email answers it.
Examples:
- “Is Your Routine Missing This?”
- “Looking for a Summer Refresh?”
Bonus Strategies to Optimize Subject Lines
A/B Test Everything
Test variables like tone, personalization, and structure. Evaluate performance by open rates, but prioritize CTR and conversions.
Align with Preheader Text
Ensure the subject line and preheader complement one another. Use the preheader to build curiosity or reinforce your offer.
Match Subject Line to Landing Page
Avoid misleading or clickbait subject lines. Your email and destination page should work together to deliver on the subject line’s promise.
Table: Subject Line Formats That Convert
Type | Example | Use Case |
---|---|---|
Urgency | “Last Chance: 20% Off Ends Tonight” | Flash sale or expiring deal |
Personalization | “[First Name], Here’s Your Weekly Pick” | Weekly update or curated content |
Offer | “Get Free Shipping All Week Long” | Ongoing promotion |
Curiosity | “We Weren’t Expecting This…” | New launch or surprise |
Question | “Want to Save on Your Next Order?” | Coupon or loyalty program |
Frequently Asked Questions
Q1: How often should I test new subject lines?
A: At least once per campaign. Run A/B tests with every major email send.
Q2: Does adding emojis improve open rates?
A: Emojis can increase open rates when used sparingly and appropriately, but they don’t work for every audience.
Q3: Should I personalize every subject line?
A: Not always, but personalization can improve open rates significantly. Use it strategically.
Q4: What’s a good open rate benchmark?
A: Industry average ranges between 18%–25%. This varies by niche and list quality.
Q5: What’s better—curiosity or clarity?
A: Depends on your audience. Curiosity can drive opens, but only if it connects to relevant content.
Q6: How long should subject lines be?
A: Under 60 characters is ideal. Keep mobile readers in mind.
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Tactic | Strategy |
✅ Front-load urgency | Use action words like “Today only,” “Limited,” “Your order is waiting” |
✅ Subject line clarity | Be specific. Skip vague copy like “Here’s something for you…” |
✅ Content relevance | Only send what the subscriber actually cares about. Personalize. |
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